AMusicPlayer Posted January 10, 2020 Share Posted January 10, 2020 Guys, please your feedback / analysis on my new composition. Op.94 https://youtu.be/JZDxENuaYBI Thank you! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quinn Posted January 11, 2020 Share Posted January 11, 2020 Well, it's nice. Relaxing. Kind of "Mystic Moods" music. You obviously have a command of standard harmonic progression; and cheesy though it might be to some I liked the uplift from C to Dflat. It has a lightening effect. Easy to listen to. No need for analysis from me - the scoring is well balanced, translucent, no point in saying "I would have done (whatever) this way rather than that". Like I might have filled out that D flat section a little more - add voice harmony or something, but no. It's good. If it rains this evening, this is the sort of music I'd love to hear sprawled in front of a fireplace reading or something. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monarcheon Posted January 14, 2020 Share Posted January 14, 2020 I like your fearlessness of the inner chords juxtaposed against the implied bass harmony. If there's one thing for me, the unchanging texture began to bother me after a bit, and you should probably have something for your soprano to sing (vowels, etc.). Also, why the 4 bars at the end? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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