epii Posted January 24, 2020 Share Posted January 24, 2020 I’m thinking about entering a song writing contest but I can’t decide which of these two pieces to use. I think I’ve posted both of them here in the past for critiques, but now I just want to know which one I should use as an instrumental entry. Also, the titles; “Mental Suicide” and “I Don’t Want to Think” are really only working titles because of words that popped into my head as I was humming out the melodies, they can be changed. I’d like an opinion on that as well. Any feedback would be most appreciated. -Rick MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu mental suicide i dont want to think > next 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atlantis_ Posted January 24, 2020 Share Posted January 24, 2020 This is very good. I think they both sound like instrumental tracks to songs by 'The Smiths'. I could almost hear Morrissey. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tortualex Posted January 25, 2020 Share Posted January 25, 2020 1st one is too hapy to be called mental suicide, sounds like something that would be played on a church. If I had to choose one, I would go for the second ( I don't want to think) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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