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Nocturne in Eb Minor

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Gradually trying to work up the keys. This nocturne is again an update like the Eb major one was. Its taking ages. Not sure about the time signatures or ending. No slurs as the software treats the slurs as a pedal sometimes. This piece might be a bit of a mess but don't know. Feedback is greatly appreciated. Thanks very much.

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The first 5 measures, sound a little, too "harsh" to be a nocturne, but I think that's because of the soundfont you used. Try to consider adding some pedal on those measures.

I like your use of irregular groupings and odd metrics, that makes it sound pretty modern but at the same time very classical.

The end is misterious, to me it sounds like it should continue, i think it's because you made the bass stop with the last chord, but the melody still keept going.

 

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Cb? Wow....hurt a musician, why don't you.

 

Measures 41-47 could be expanding more. 

 

This piece was great to listen to! Look forward to hearing more.

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Awesome!

There are really nice ideas in here, and the piece sounds very complete.

Perhaps it would be better named as "fantasia".

The notation is a bit of a mess, but it just needs some work done, nothing serious. I don't see why you changed the key signature right at the end. Also the time signature changes sometimes don't make much sense. For example in M.40: you have 5/4 and then 3/4, while the last bar in M.40 could easly be placed in M.41. Why not keep both 4/4?

Anyways, if played nicely think it would sound very entertaining. I love this kind of bubbly, dreamy textures you have going on here.

 

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I enjoyed the piece, I see some disconnection between parts, but that may be your intentions. A great complex work, I working for reaching that point, amazing job!

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