clarinet trio - 2 parts

hi, this is unfinshed clarinet trio, but i thought i could share it anyway. i think the second part of it spoils the feeling, its too fast,but it is there still.  "karhun ulvonta" means "howling of bear"

It's a different choice to have the sections in several styles. Many times the phrases are too long (it needs breathing pauses). Sometimes there are sudden changes as harmony by fourths that, I think, need some transition-preparation. The feeling is  a bit tiring because all the time the notes are quick and the melody jumpy.

There is no reason to put a concert score for chamber music.   

Make sure you write for a BREATH! This is for humans!  We have to breath.

I can remember when I first started composing, as a teenager, that my ideas were for the mostly well meaning however often fell well short of what I had envisioned. One of the reasons for this was my lack of experience and understanding of the form and style of music I tried to emulate.

With respect, whatever you are trying to do with this you need to appreciate that it might be out of your depth. Start small and simple before building up to ambitious projects. I can help you with that!