WindmillWilly Posted February 20, 2020 Share Posted February 20, 2020 (edited) . Edited April 30, 2020 by WindmillWilly Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monarcheon Posted February 22, 2020 Share Posted February 22, 2020 Lots of homophony; too much for me. Distinct voices would be nice. Also, all your key changes are unnecessary. Just make it an un-keyed score. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maestrowick Posted February 22, 2020 Share Posted February 22, 2020 3 hours ago, Monarcheon said: Lots of homophony; too much for me. Distinct voices would be nice. Also, all your key changes are unnecessary. Just make it an un-keyed score. EXACTLY what @Monarcheon wrote. This piece desperately needs some counterpoint. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WindmillWilly Posted February 22, 2020 Author Share Posted February 22, 2020 19 hours ago, maestrowick said: EXACTLY what @Monarcheon wrote. This piece desperately needs some counterpoint. Completely true. Thank you for your input, both of you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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