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First Piano Concerto, First Movement

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Here is the first movement of my first piano concerto. Any criticisms are welcome and wanted, as I've only started composing about a year ago (also to help shrink my ego a bit). Thank you all in advance!

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Lots of homophony; too much for me. Distinct voices would be nice.
Also, all your key changes are unnecessary. Just make it an un-keyed score. 

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3 hours ago, Monarcheon said:

Lots of homophony; too much for me. Distinct voices would be nice.
Also, all your key changes are unnecessary. Just make it an un-keyed score. 

 

EXACTLY what @Monarcheon wrote.  This piece desperately needs some counterpoint.

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