Tomer13 Posted March 3, 2020 Share Posted March 3, 2020 Hi, I started to compose in the last year or so and I would really like to get some feedback on this piece. I am trying to compose in a style that could be for a movie or an anime. thank 🙂    MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Take_My_Hand > next 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AngelCityOutlaw Posted April 19, 2020 Share Posted April 19, 2020 Nice. I like it overall and it would be good to hear it played by an ensemble. Personally, I don't really feel the off-beat rhythm you have in the accompaniment around 1:30 really jives with the melody as well there. But other than I don't really have any complaints, personally. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monarcheon Posted April 19, 2020 Share Posted April 19, 2020 I can tell that you're doing your best to prep certain "moments". And it's done pretty well, like around the 2:30 mark. Your left hand dependence on octaves and fifths of the root is a little tiresome after a while. Since your chord progression primarily employs root motion by step, subversions of this with leaps to inversions or a secondary phrase model would spice things up, as would a change to its overall blocky texture. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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