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Hi,

I started to compose in the last year or so and I would really like to get some feedback on this piece.

I am trying to compose in a style that could be for a movie or an anime.

thank 🙂

 

 

 

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I can tell that you're doing your best to prep certain "moments". And it's done pretty well, like around the 2:30 mark.
Your left hand dependence on octaves and fifths of the root is a little tiresome after a while. Since your chord progression primarily employs root motion by step, subversions of this with leaps to inversions or a secondary phrase model would spice things up, as would a change to its overall blocky texture.

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