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Man, great job.  Please get rid of those double flats in that opening...although I get WHY you did.  it functions more Dmajor than anything else though.

I respect you wanting to have it linear.  

Still, I think you can make both pieces longer.  You're on to something great here!

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3 hours ago, maestrowick said:

Man, great job.  Please get rid of those double flats in that opening...although I get WHY you did.  it functions more Dmajor than anything else though.

I respect you wanting to have it linear.  

Still, I think you can make both pieces longer.  You're on to something great here!

 

I'm about to bring something larger. These were my first "finished" pieces after all, so nothing much. Thanks for the answer!

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