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Hi, it sounds lovely.

Very cinematic, catchy motiv and use of nice different textures. I didn't look at the score on detail, but the harmony is definitely rich and well driven.

Consistent short piece and very pleasant 🙂 (I played it already 3 times)

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I agree with Theodore Servin- the final section is very short and seems like it could be a fully developed section.  It's also a bit too well separated for my taste- perhaps a linking theme, a more subtle change in pulse or at least a pedal note between the two sections would make them less disjunct?  Your melody writing is very fluent though and as others have said the texture is well handled, well done.

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