Matthew Crigger Posted April 28, 2020 Share Posted April 28, 2020 https://youtu.be/foCBNAHF9RE This song is called Smell the Roses. I have attached the lyrics below. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
francoisfj Posted April 29, 2020 Share Posted April 29, 2020 I like it. The melody is memorable, and the lyrics work well with the music. The only thing I have to say is that it's a little short, but it kinds of give an effect of something being just transient, which complements the lyrics I find. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monarcheon Posted May 28, 2020 Share Posted May 28, 2020 Simple, which is fine. Maybe consider a short rhythm-breaker in the bass with a 3 note walkup or something for text painting purposes, but it functions well as is. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PeterthePapercomPoser Posted July 10, 2020 Share Posted July 10, 2020 Hi Matthew. Did you come up with the lyrics yourself? They're quite personal and melancholic so maybe they came from experience (but you don't have to answer that if you don't want to). The tone of the music fits the lyrics. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rileyt Posted July 13, 2020 Share Posted July 13, 2020 I don’t have any questions/comments about the lyrics or theory side of the piece, I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed listening to it and I thought it was beautifully written. Great job! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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