antimusicale Posted May 15, 2020 Share Posted May 15, 2020 Hello, I bring another modern comtemporary work I made in this quaranteen, hope you like, feedback is always welcome. Stay safe! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luis Hernández Posted May 16, 2020 Share Posted May 16, 2020 This piece is beautiful but it lacks of punctuation (clear cadences) so its structures is weak. Also, dynamics in this style are important. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
antimusicale Posted May 21, 2020 Author Share Posted May 21, 2020 On 5/16/2020 at 11:59 AM, Luis Hernández said: This piece is beautiful but it lacks of punctuation (clear cadences) so its structures is weak. Also, dynamics in this style are important. Hello, thanks for the complement and yes I agree, the structure is weak, I am still improving this new style so I will work on that. Also the dynamics are present but in a very short window of time, I will also correct that as I see the problem now, trying to make them more natural. I appreciate a lot your feedback! Stay safe Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
accmacmusic Posted May 27, 2020 Share Posted May 27, 2020 Atonality is not my favourite genre, but I found the development — especially in the left hand — interesting and refreshing. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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