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On 5/16/2020 at 11:59 AM, Luis Hernández said:

This piece is beautiful but it lacks of punctuation (clear cadences) so its structures is weak. Also, dynamics in this style are important.

 

Hello, thanks for the complement and yes I agree, the structure is weak, I am still improving this new style so I will work on that. Also the dynamics are present but in a very short window of time, I will also correct that as I see the problem now, trying to make them more natural. 

I appreciate a lot your feedback! 

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