Guillem82 Posted June 18, 2020 Share Posted June 18, 2020 (edited) I wrote this music idea today, but no idea how continue or how to finish it. It seems I could keep modulating every 9 bar endless, but at that point I think I should come up with something different and also related to the previous bars...Any ideas? Not sure about the key neither. I wrote it as Gm. It reminds me of Erik Satie... Edited June 18, 2020 by Guillem82 MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Hypnosis > next PDF Hypnosis 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dugdig Posted July 3, 2020 Share Posted July 3, 2020 I think it's effective, but I think you are looking for a theme 2 ... or else looking for an ending, could just be a final cadence or a series of chords in a sequence. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leonardo C. Núñez Posted July 4, 2020 Share Posted July 4, 2020 I does remind me of satie a bit, but it repeats a little to much in my opinion. Maybe try adding a different theme or changing something up a it 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guillem82 Posted July 4, 2020 Author Share Posted July 4, 2020 Thanks for your comments. Yes, I have to think on some variations to avoid monotony and how to finish it 🙂. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luis Hernández Posted August 4, 2020 Share Posted August 4, 2020 When something like this comes to mind, it's hard to find an exit. The idea is good confronting a kind of pedal sounds with chromatic lines. It's true that as a standalone fragmente, it becomes monotonous. I would break it in measure 19 and keep that last part for a repetition or conclusion. Inserting something else. I would take care with new material because the emotion you created is very soft, since the texture is thin and constant. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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