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This piece starts off really well but i got lost. It has the promise of something great because i can hear good ideas its just as a whole i dont think it quite works. Its in F major but you use accidentals in the bar rather than using the key signature. The harmonic progression must be clear for a piece like this because it has no melody but the lack of a good harmonic progression stalls the flow of the piece. The deep muddy notes are ugly and spoil the baroque feel that you begin with too. I can hear key changes that feel awkward as well. Im only a beginner so please take my comments with a pinch of salt. 

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