Albayrak Posted July 27, 2020 Share Posted July 27, 2020 (edited) . Edited July 31, 2021 by ClasiCompose Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PeterthePapercomPoser Posted July 27, 2020 Share Posted July 27, 2020 I wish you had used some tempo changes or chords foreign to the key you're in to bring some more contrast to the music. Honestly, the melody sounds like you were just putting down notes. It would benefit your music much if you could whistle or sing the melody after you hear it. But that's just my opinion. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Albayrak Posted July 28, 2020 Author Share Posted July 28, 2020 13 hours ago, PaperComposer said: I wish you had used some tempo changes or chords foreign to the key you're in to bring some more contrast to the music. Honestly, the melody sounds like you were just putting down notes. It would benefit your music much if you could whistle or sing the melody after you hear it. But that's just my opinion. Thanks for listening , and expressing your thoughts. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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