Moueen Issa 9 Posted July 31, 2020 Share Posted July 31, 2020 This is a short piano piece I have composed. I hope you like it. MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Prelude No.2 in D major > next 1 Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Bradley Scarff 50 Posted July 31, 2020 Share Posted July 31, 2020 Hey could you provide a score as to give more detailed analysis?? 1 Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Moueen Issa 9 Posted August 1, 2020 Author Share Posted August 1, 2020 16 hours ago, Bradley Scarff said: Hey could you provide a score as to give more detailed analysis?? Of course! PDF Prelude No.2 in D major 1 Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Bradley Scarff 50 Posted August 1, 2020 Share Posted August 1, 2020 It's an excellent little piece, you have fantastic phrasing and expression, Parts of the main theme felt a little too repetitive at times particularly when it comes back, perhaps you could add some rhythmic interest with some triplets somewhere. Measure 18: That trill does sound very convincing to me, perhaps use a descending sequence to land back on the tonic. The middle section in 2/4 sounds a bit jarring initially, It's a good theme but it comes in too suddenly, perhaps reworking the bar before would apply some more beneficial transitions. Over all it's very good. It individual and has a distinct style. I look forward to seeing more of you work 🙂 1 Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Moueen Issa 9 Posted August 1, 2020 Author Share Posted August 1, 2020 5 minutes ago, Bradley Scarff said: It's an excellent little piece, you have fantastic phrasing and expression, Parts of the main theme felt a little too repetitive at times particularly when it comes back, perhaps you could add some rhythmic interest with some triplets somewhere. Measure 18: That trill does sound very convincing to me, perhaps use a descending sequence to land back on the tonic. The middle section in 2/4 sounds a bit jarring initially, It's a good theme but it comes in too suddenly, perhaps reworking the bar before would apply some more beneficial transitions. Over all it's very good. It individual and has a distinct style. I look forward to seeing more of you work 🙂 Thank you very much! Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Yuchanbot 8 Posted August 1, 2020 Share Posted August 1, 2020 Very pleasant piece !!! I agree the main theme feels a bit repetitive at times 1 Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Guillem82 132 Posted August 3, 2020 Share Posted August 3, 2020 (edited) I like that quite a lot, Amazing. I love how you use that simple motif of 2 eighth notes anacrusis as a backbone of the piece. Also the left hand helps to emphasize the rythm and flow. Did you got inspirantion from a certain style or composer. Very catchy and clever all through 🙂 Congratulations! I don't know why I reminds me a bit of that lovely prelude by E. Grieg, though the similarities are not evident. Edited August 3, 2020 by Guillem82 1 Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Moueen Issa 9 Posted August 3, 2020 Author Share Posted August 3, 2020 45 minutes ago, Guillem82 said: I like that quite a lot, Amazing. I love how you use that simple motif of 2 eighth notes anacrusis as a backbone of the piece. Also the left hand helps to emphasize the rythm and flow. Did you got inspirantion from a certain style or composer. Very catchy and clever all through 🙂 Congratulations! I don't know why I reminds me a bit of that lovely prelude by E. Grieg, though the similarities are not evident. Thank you a lot! Actually, I was imitating Mozart's style. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Guillem82 132 Posted August 3, 2020 Share Posted August 3, 2020 (edited) 1 hour ago, Moueen Issa said: Thank you a lot! Actually, I was imitating Mozart's style. Interesting, I would have never said it was Mozart inspiried, because it sounds a bit more contemporary to me... but anyway what actually matters is the good result 🙂 Edited August 3, 2020 by Guillem82 1 Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Thatguy v2.0 211 Posted August 5, 2020 Share Posted August 5, 2020 I really love this piece. I've been revisiting Mozart lately and have come to truly appreciate the genius that he was. I can definitely hear the influence from him, but I think you've done a tremendous job in taking from him a wealth of knowledge and making something your own. I would have loved some more rests in the B theme! It's a beautiful progression, but a bit of phrasing would elevate this to the next level imo. This is one I'll come back to often, thanks for sharing! I hope you stick around and comment on others works. You'll receive more feedback too 1 Quote Link to post Share on other sites
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