Papageno Posted August 27, 2020 Share Posted August 27, 2020 A minuet for flute and cello in D. I called it The Dancing Soldier because the melody sounds like a march. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JorgeDavid Posted August 29, 2020 Share Posted August 29, 2020 Really nice melody as always! I really liked the change of rhythm in section B and the dissonance and resolution of the melody with the underlying chord in measures 14 and 16! My only comment is that in measure 16, if it was a 4-3 suspension-resolution sound you were after, it might sound slightly better if you changed the B-D-B-F-D-F of the bass to a B-F-B-F-D-F in order to not play the third of the B chord chord before the resolution to D in the melody has taken place. I have not tried it so I am not sure, but just something to consider. Nice piece and I agree that the title seems to suit it really well! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Papageno Posted August 31, 2020 Author Share Posted August 31, 2020 On 8/29/2020 at 6:51 PM, JorgeDavid said: Really nice melody as always! I really liked the change of rhythm in section B and the dissonance and resolution of the melody with the underlying chord in measures 14 and 16! My only comment is that in measure 16, if it was a 4-3 suspension-resolution sound you were after, it might sound slightly better if you changed the B-D-B-F-D-F of the bass to a B-F-B-F-D-F in order to not play the third of the B chord chord before the resolution to D in the melody has taken place. I have not tried it so I am not sure, but just something to consider. Nice piece and I agree that the title seems to suit it really well! Hi, Jorge. Thank you for your kind comments. I'll have a play at the piano and check out your suggestion. 🙂 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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