Yuchanbot Posted September 15, 2020 Share Posted September 15, 2020 (edited) deleted Edited March 21 by Yuchanbot 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PeterthePapercomPoser Posted September 15, 2020 Share Posted September 15, 2020 Very nice! My favorite part is measures 23 and 24. Borrowing from E major before foreshadowing the move to the relative major (A major) with that A minor chord was very affecting. It looks like the words to the song have been redacted in the pdf? I wish I could read the words. Nice job! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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PeterthePapercomPoser Posted September 16, 2020 Share Posted September 16, 2020 14 minutes ago, Yuchanbot said: Thanks! I can show you the poem if you want, but the words are in Korean I guess not then ... unless you'd be willing to translate? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pateceramics Posted September 21, 2020 Share Posted September 21, 2020 Lovely! I'd like to know what the words are as well! You use every inch of the standard soprano range here. This piece will be a lovely show piece for many singers, but you would open your works up to more voices and potentially increase the number of performances, and the quality of those performances if you were slightly more conservative in your use of range for future pieces. For singers, the body is the instrument. If you have even a little cold, you tend to lose the extremes of your range for a few days. If you want to go this high, but don't also go quite so low, singers and their pianists can do an emergency transposition down a step if necessary, without bottoming out. You could also provide a transposition in a key suitable for mezzo voice, and pick up a few more performances. This is great! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guillem82 Posted October 5, 2020 Share Posted October 5, 2020 Bravo @yuchanbot. Really nice piece of music! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexander Reiger Posted November 16, 2020 Share Posted November 16, 2020 I really liked this piece! There's a fair deal of rhythmic variation and some mode mixture which keeps things interesting, but overall it still feels grounded and consistent. And you've managed to come up with a memorable main theme that ties the piece together very nicely. I'm trying to think of a criticism but I can't come up with any – all I can say is that it would sound much better with an actual singer performing! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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