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And again... you make my mind go "simply music..."

Made a poem, since i like poetry and I love your music:

Music... this sound that comes to my heart from the silence,
I feel calm, emotion, passion, the color I smell,
I see how it tastes, I touch its sound, brings me reminiscence...
How is that I feel, the liberty, when inside of this shell?

Falls, on the ground, is that a meteor, is that a star?
It doesn't shine, what is it, but a cold try?
A try of fantasy, a prelude to that sonata that starts

It doesn't shine, but it enlightens me I won't lie,
It fugues my imagination, it opera-tes my heart,
"Lieder Ohne worte" in the sound, "reflets dans l'eau", without light.

Running birds in the sky,                                                (along that ascending ban run)
Feels like swimming on this air,
Raining seas keep it dry,
Might be drowning on this afair,

What's this feeling? Is magic right?
What fell off was my torment,
What shines are my eyes,

Are my words the ones that fly,
Are my breaths the ones that augment,
Are my tears the ones that fight,

What's keeping them? Eyelids that unzip,
Brain that opens, jail let's free my mind,
I wanted to remember, memories rewind.
What's this feeling? Is that... MUSIC?


(mind I did my best with my english level, if I could use spanish I would have done a cultured one).

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On 10/26/2020 at 7:14 PM, DarrenEngland said:

Third time listening and I can barely type for tears!

 

Darren, thank you very much, I really appreciate your sincere feelings and words. I also saw your flute minuet in D and I really liked it. No doubt you love music and have the ability to make your music better and better.

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On 10/29/2020 at 6:11 AM, J.Santos said:

And again... you make my mind go "simply music..."

Made a poem, since i like poetry and I love your music:

Music... this sound that comes to my heart from the silence,
I feel calm, emotion, passion, the color I smell,
I see how it tastes, I touch its sound, brings me reminiscence...
How is that I feel, the liberty, when inside of this shell?

Falls, on the ground, is that a meteor, is that a star?
It doesn't shine, what is it, but a cold try?
A try of fantasy, a prelude to that sonata that starts

It doesn't shine, but it enlightens me I won't lie,
It fugues my imagination, it opera-tes my heart,
"Lieder Ohne worte" in the sound, "reflets dans l'eau", without light.

Running birds in the sky,                                                (along that ascending ban run)
Feels like swimming on this air,
Raining seas keep it dry,
Might be drowning on this afair,

What's this feeling? Is magic right?
What fell off was my torment,
What shines are my eyes,

Are my words the ones that fly,
Are my breaths the ones that augment,
Are my tears the ones that fight,

What's keeping them? Eyelids that unzip,
Brain that opens, jail let's free my mind,
I wanted to remember, memories rewind.
What's this feeling? Is that... MUSIC?


(mind I did my best with my english level, if I could use spanish I would have done a cultured one).

 

I have no words. I'm not so good at english, let alone English poetry. But the effort you put into this comment/poem (especially not in your own language) only arouses my great gratitude and respect to you and your education.

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