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Hello everyone, I am back, this is my new piece, hope you like it.

The video: https://www.bilibili.com/video/BV1Pk4y1y7UM/

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The Allegretto Grazioso section starting at m. 86 is slightly muddy in the left hand.  Also, the section at m. 118 is a bit arpeggio-heavy for my taste and it goes on for quite a while just restating the same pattern over and over at different pitch levels - I was begging for some kind of change to the pattern or variation.  I do like that your recapitulation is different and with some pleasant figurations added (139-140, 147-148).  On the whole your piece is enjoyable in it's most melodic parts but I wish it consisted of more unique melodies and less arpeggiation and empty virtuosity.  Thanks for sharing!

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