cloud10000 Posted October 17, 2020 Share Posted October 17, 2020 (edited) Hello everyone, I am back, this is my new piece, hope you like it. The video: https://www.bilibili.com/video/BV1Pk4y1y7UM/ Edited October 17, 2020 by cloud10000 adjusted the score MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Op2 Nr5 > next PDF Op2 Nr5 score Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PeterthePapercomPoser Posted October 18, 2020 Share Posted October 18, 2020 The Allegretto Grazioso section starting at m. 86 is slightly muddy in the left hand. Also, the section at m. 118 is a bit arpeggio-heavy for my taste and it goes on for quite a while just restating the same pattern over and over at different pitch levels - I was begging for some kind of change to the pattern or variation. I do like that your recapitulation is different and with some pleasant figurations added (139-140, 147-148). On the whole your piece is enjoyable in it's most melodic parts but I wish it consisted of more unique melodies and less arpeggiation and empty virtuosity. Thanks for sharing! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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