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  • composerfeb changed the title to for piano and other instruments
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You have some beautiful harmonic and melodic ideas. The piano sections are the strength of the song.

I think maybe the brass in the beginning is a bit bombastic compared to the rest of the piece? Maybe have them play a bit softer or save them for another piece.

The brass in the third section is very far from the rest of the songs also, but you can keep some of the ideas if you change the instrumentation and thus making it more coherent to the rest of the song?

Suggestion: In the end piano section you can try to have like a string tone lingering (violin I) while having the piano play, for example.

Another suggestion is you have some theme that connects the beginning to the end, or something like that. What do you think?

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