cloud10000 Posted November 18, 2020 Share Posted November 18, 2020 (edited) this is a piano arrangement of a Christian hymn written by me, hope you like it the video: https://www.bilibili.com/video/BV1Ya4y1p7zh/ Edited November 20, 2020 by cloud10000 for some adjustment MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Op2 Nr7 > next PDF Op2 Nr7 score 1 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Olov Posted November 25, 2020 Share Posted November 25, 2020 I love hymns. This was a beautiful song and nice use of articulation, technique and variety in playing styles. Brilliant ideas. I was bugging out by the pedal that never releases and but it can be something in the written form. In places like 01:13 it becomes dissonant to the harmonies coming after. Somewhere in the middle there was a bass heavy part, maybe skip the pedal completely. At the end the low chords gets a little "muddy", try more dense chords intervals. Someone told me dense chords sounds best in the middle of a piano, and he's got a point. You have a key change or modulation to minor in the latter part of the song, could you modulate it differently? It seems to be coming from nowhere. Just my own thoughts, didn't mean to sound harsh. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GospelPiano12 Posted January 21, 2021 Share Posted January 21, 2021 This is beautiful. I love the way 2:36 and onward sounds. You seem really knowledgeable, I have written some hymns myself,and I'd like to have them transcribed in a SATB Bach chorales format. Maybe you can help? 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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