Memories for Orchestra

this piece is a short soundtrack that I wrote in a short time. this may be a depiction of memories that seem far away , but I would like to know how it makes you feel ? thanks for any kind of feedback 

https://youtu.be/zRRljCauPY0

I have noticed that many of your pieces seem to be kind of slow and flowing moderately.  It would be great to hear a more energetic and up-beat type of composition from you to kind of break out of your usual routine when it comes to composing.  It might also be quite a bit more exciting to hear because it might force you to come up with some melodic ideas with maybe a bit more vitality and terseness.  That's just my suggestion and I guess a kind of response to what you have presented here.  Thanks for sharing!

13 hours ago, PaperComposer said:

I have noticed that many of your pieces seem to be kind of slow and flowing moderately.  It would be great to hear a more energetic and up-beat type of composition from you to kind of break out of your usual routine when it comes to composing.  It might also be quite a bit more exciting to hear because it might force you to come up with some melodic ideas with maybe a bit more vitality and terseness.  That's just my suggestion and I guess a kind of response to what you have presented here.  Thanks for sharing!

 

thank you for your reply. I guess it's a problem with my current mood. so I may need some time to write fast and vitaly stuff