Left Unexplained Posted January 30, 2021 Share Posted January 30, 2021 (edited) my first sing song! lyrics: something's in the air tonight, might take off this cruel disguise, for a moment. I never saw your eyes in the moonlight, I never wanted somethin so bad so bad so bad so bad always wondered what it's like, to love you you touched my face and I was high, above you heads in the clouds cuz you dont put me down, looking at the stars as we lie on the ground, I didn't know heaven reached so low so low so low low Chorus: Didn't know my life sucked til I met you, If you only know just what I went through, I know you aren't my savior, But won't you save me, tonight Walking round the block, nowhere to go but up, Too drunk to stand but I can't stand to leave you alone, lone, lone, You're a work of art, the mona lisa if its hot, baby, And I would die if I saw you painted by some one else Turpentine on the party vibes, time for all the boys and girls to say goodnight, will you still love me tomorrow or will you just be another dream of mine chorus Edited January 31, 2021 by Left Unexplained MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Moonlight > next 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PeterthePapercomPoser Posted January 30, 2021 Share Posted January 30, 2021 LoL I hate to be the only one to keep reminding you of this but ... where are the lyrics? Really great word painting on "I didn't know heaven reached so low, so low, so low, low" since you descend lower and lower as you sing that. Really great harmonic ideas which keep this fresh. Also the rhythm of your words in the 2nd verse is different than the 1st so that adds some great variety. I love the raunchy bass near the end. You should go on "America's got Talent" with this! Either that or get Rod Stewart to sing it for you as his raspy voice would be perfect for the feel of this song. Really great modern song influenced by glitch and hip hop music! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Left Unexplained Posted January 31, 2021 Author Share Posted January 31, 2021 1 hour ago, PaperComposer said: LoL I hate to be the only one to keep reminding you of this but ... where are the lyrics? Really great word painting on "I didn't know heaven reached so low, so low, so low, low" since you descend lower and lower as you sing that. Really great harmonic ideas which keep this fresh. Also the rhythm of your words in the 2nd verse is different than the 1st so that adds some great variety. I love the raunchy bass near the end. You should go on "America's got Talent" with this! Either that or get Rod Stewart to sing it for you as his raspy voice would be perfect for the feel of this song. Really great modern song influenced by glitch and hip hop music! wow harsh. jk thank u! I will edit it with the lyrics. thanks bro. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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