Op4 Nr1 The Art of Repetition

this is my new piece in minimal style, hope you like it, you can give me some suggestion if you like.

the video: https://www.bilibili.com/video/BV1Zv411h7ZN/

I think this is a really cool idea.  You have the right idea with development in this kind of piece when you delay/shift some of the parts by a 16th note but I think you could have done more of that to create some more really interesting ostinati with more contrapuntal complexity.  It's still interesting to hear although I feel like there could be more purpose behind the music.  Right now it sounds like you just juxtapose two seemingly unrelated sections of music without a transition.  Although I guess they're related because they're both constructed minimalistically.  Thanks for sharing!