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The White Space (asking for suggestions/improvements)


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Hey all,

My friend introduced me to this forum and so he suggested me to give this a shot so here goes nothing!
I attached below a piece of mine called "The White Space" as well as some explanations for some of the things and notations in it. 
I know there are some areas that need improvement, but my teacher doesn't really provide the most clearest of feedback, so was wondering if y'all could me out?
(Also, the time limit for this is around 5 mins and so yeah use that information if it helps? bleh)


Anyways, cheers, and happy composing!
 

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