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What do you think about my composition? - Sonata in D minor (unfinished)


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  • 1 month later...

I think you should call this a sonatina, it is too short to be considerer a full sonata.

Is this supused to be a classical soanta? if it is then you should work on your first movement, because it doesn't have the proper form, if not it is okay because it sounds pretty good.

I measure 9 it is pretty imposible to sustain the D for 7 measures at that speed, you'll run out of bow, so you should check that.

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  • 2 weeks later...

What you have is not a sonata or a sonatina, but fragments.

If you're really interested in writing a sonata, you need to start from scratch with Sonata Allegro form.

For example: Introduction. First theme. Contrasting second theme. Development. Modulation. Recapitulation.

A sonata is a dramatic structure, leading us along with tension and resolution, like an exciting story.

Cheers,
Jer

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