jejrekmek Posted August 23, 2021 Share Posted August 23, 2021 (edited) Another nocturne. Currently working on the score Edited December 29, 2021 by jejrekmek MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Nocturne in D Flat Major > next PDF Nocturne in D-flat Major (2) 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PeterthePapercomPoser Posted August 25, 2021 Share Posted August 25, 2021 I like it, but I feel like you use richly voiced accompaniment much too often without a break. It's like eating rich food all the time - likely to give one indigestion. That might be part of the style but I feel like it would have given the piece a nice contrast because changing the accompaniment to be more sparse somewhere in the piece would give the piece a different texture momentarily. Also - for some reason I hear the music coming through the left speaker only. Maybe you can't record in stereo? I had that problem back on my old machine/set-up. This feels like a nicely through-composed piece and in a way that's an asset to your melodic constitution - it feels very improvisatory. But at the same time I feel like it could benefit from more melodic structure such as using periods, double periods or sentences to organize the phrases instead of connecting the melodies with chromatic fioraturas. Still - nonetheless enjoyable to listen to. Thanks for sharing! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Left Unexplained Posted August 25, 2021 Share Posted August 25, 2021 (edited) great song Edited August 25, 2021 by Left Unexplained 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jejrekmek Posted August 26, 2021 Author Share Posted August 26, 2021 19 hours ago, Left Unexplained said: great song thx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luis Hernández Posted August 27, 2021 Share Posted August 27, 2021 Quite beautiful. It would be nice to see the score (just to learn). 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jejrekmek Posted September 30, 2021 Author Share Posted September 30, 2021 (edited) On 8/27/2021 at 12:37 AM, Luis Hernández said: Quite beautiful. It would be nice to see the score (just to learn). Here you go Edited December 29, 2021 by jejrekmek PDF Nocturne in D-flat Major (2) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aled Edwards Posted October 10, 2021 Share Posted October 10, 2021 Nice piece! I like the chromatic runs in particular 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SergeOfArniVillage Posted November 20, 2021 Share Posted November 20, 2021 I don’t have much to say, because I second everything Peter said. I love that you used a dotted rhythm for the chromatic scales, I don’t often hear it like that (similar to Chopin’s Op. 9 No. 3) and that was really neat. Love the passion in your playing, and you have a great ear for “delicious, sweet” harmonies — reminds me of syrup😊 Thanks for sharing! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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