MJFOBOE Posted August 31, 2021 Share Posted August 31, 2021 (edited) This is a work completed last year and touched up today. It represent the hustle and bustle of Manhattan in the morning. All comments most welcome. Edited August 31, 2021 by MJFOBOE 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MJFOBOE Posted August 31, 2021 Author Share Posted August 31, 2021 (edited) Just tweaked it a bit! 😉 Edited August 31, 2021 by MJFOBOE Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Olov Posted September 10, 2021 Share Posted September 10, 2021 It just sound so good. Interesting setting with three strings and a clarinet - they blend together nicely. The melody in the clarinet, the string accompaniment, very tasteful, soft and airy - I feel cultivated. I like the harmonics. What software are you using for audio? The ending seems a little abrubt, like something more is coming. Maybe you intended that feeling? Anyway, other than that I can't find anything weak with this piece. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MJFOBOE Posted September 10, 2021 Author Share Posted September 10, 2021 Thanks for the review. The audio library is NotePerformer 3. I'll take another look at the ending. There are some other sections - I would like to tweak more~! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Papageno Posted September 12, 2021 Share Posted September 12, 2021 I liked the inconclusive ending. It made me feel an emotion that is very abstract and hard to explain. Its as though the person walking the streets has arrived at work but sighs because its a dead end job. It made want to listen again. The whole piece describes the busy impersonal city streets and how there's an orderliness to the chaos really well. Its both beautiful and ugly, I love it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MJFOBOE Posted September 13, 2021 Author Share Posted September 13, 2021 Thanks for the review ..... I really like this work too .... I'm going to devote a bit more time it. There are a few places I would like to have a bit more consistency of mood and flow. The original work was written for a dear friend a french horn player ... who passed away before a friendly performance for our orchestra colleagues. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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