March fanfare (for open place?) for soprano instrument

This is one instrument piece that is in march form except that verses are 10 bars long. At this moment i dont know what to add to it. 

What do you want to add exactly? Another instrument?, more development to certain sections perhaps? 

• From what I hear now it could be nice if there was some drum and another flute as a second voice. 
• The absence of dynamics is even bothering, but that is prolly because I had the volume too high lol.
• Definitely needs a better final in my humble opinion. 
• While I see like a good showing off exercise and some bits are definitely interesting, I think working in the articulation and dynamics will add alone so much colour to the piece. I may be wrong, but I would recommend you to try. 

This post fell into the oblivion for months and I just stumbled upon it so perhaps you did something with this work. Any news regarding that?

Kind regards,
Daniel–Ømicrón.