ComposedBySam Posted October 2, 2022 Share Posted October 2, 2022 Constructive criticism is warmly welcome 🙂 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Omicronrg9 Posted October 3, 2022 Share Posted October 3, 2022 Constructive criticism: • Minor detail: beware of the Pedal markings, their end indication sometimes overlap with the starting indication of the next line. • Another minor detail: why all indications end with a dot? Opinions: • The repeated motif is catchy and will really shine in any human interpretation that's for sure. • I like the 8 bars before the M49 & the coda a bit more the rest of the piece :), good job there... excepting perhaps M57-59 that sounded a bit like "Tico Tico no fuba" and which I liked even more possibly. I felt like this was kind of a theme with variations at that point and I would have really loved if you had developed those three bars more, they were great! Good job! Kind regards, Daniel–Ømicrón.   1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ComposedBySam Posted October 3, 2022 Author Share Posted October 3, 2022 8 hours ago, Omicronrg9 said: Constructive criticism: • Minor detail: beware of the Pedal markings, their end indication sometimes overlap with the starting indication of the next line. • Another minor detail: why all indications end with a dot? Opinions: • The repeated motif is catchy and will really shine in any human interpretation that's for sure. • I like the 8 bars before the M49 & the coda a bit more the rest of the piece :), good job there... excepting perhaps M57-59 that sounded a bit like "Tico Tico no fuba" and which I liked even more possibly. I felt like this was kind of a theme with variations at that point and I would have really loved if you had developed those three bars more, they were great! Good job! Kind regards, Daniel–Ømicrón.    Thanks for listening and giving such a great feedback Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bkho Posted October 3, 2022 Share Posted October 3, 2022 I like it, essentially a compressed theme in variations. Reminds me a little of Beethoven's C minor variations which is also based on a simple stepwise moving harmonic progression (though his was ascending while yours is descending). 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ComposedBySam Posted October 4, 2022 Author Share Posted October 4, 2022 14 hours ago, bkho said: I like it, essentially a compressed theme in variations. Reminds me a little of Beethoven's C minor variations which is also based on a simple stepwise moving harmonic progression (though his was ascending while yours is descending.  Yes you got that right. Thanks for listening 🙂 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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