Hello,  In January I posted an incomplete Piano Concerto. I decided to create a Sonata based on that material. It is kind of finished although there are several places I am not totally satisfied with. I would like to hear from anyone about the form of the piece and whether I have successfully demonstrated a coherent sonata form (as this is for an assignment that is to compose a piece in sonata form). Also if you have any specific ideas i.e a better pianistic idea or a change to the harmony