HtWinsor Posted May 14, 2023 Share Posted May 14, 2023 Hi here my 8th bagatelle it is in the key of F Major! Enjoy! MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Bagatelle 8 > next PDF Bagatelle 8 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PCC Posted May 14, 2023 Share Posted May 14, 2023 for bars 11 and 15, do you want the second half of those bars to follow the next bar similarly i.e. left hand off beat strumming? I think that would keep the piece's momentum going. The harmonics to me does sound a bit strange for this classical style, but let's see what others think. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luis Hernández Posted May 14, 2023 Share Posted May 14, 2023 Although it sounds like an early classical style, it has some elements that are out of place. For example those thick chords under a thin melody line. It sounds good but the harmony is basic and could do with some surprising harmonic moments. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Papageno Posted May 14, 2023 Share Posted May 14, 2023 I hope you don't mind but I took a closer look at the beginning of your piece, which I really like btw, and I jotted down an alternative that's perhaps more in style. I then improvised a little at the end to round it off. I play at a slower speed than you intended for your piece but it would work at either pace. 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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