I think it is pretty good but yeah the length... I mean the idea of a wasteland is really nice cause that is exactly what it sounds like, but I think you need to change the tempo up more without the space of long wasteland in between. Because really who wants to be in a wasteland for all that long... But overall a good peice and I'm glad you shared!:)
I have this song that was actually the first song that I wrote that I actually felt decent about. This is an older recording and actually pretty poor... since then I have changed up a few chords and things to make it a little more harmonized but I really know nothing about theory so if I could get some opinions on how to make this better it would be appreciated... I will need the feedback a little watered down also cause I don't know much.
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