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By Jean Szulc · Posted
Very cool-sounding. It's well-balanced an the sections complement each other well, without it all sounding too chopped-up or too repetitive. I also feel like this might be very fun to perform/conduct. -
By Jean Szulc · Posted
@aMusicComposer Could you please not talk about me? It's possibly because of the midi sounds. It does also reminds me of pokemon (and toontown, lol) About the piece itself, I feel you could make the instrumentation a bit more lively by not emphasizing the strong beats too much. I feel like this piece could benefit from being more rhytmically ambiguous. The last measures sound really good because of that. Also, I know you're composing in this classical setting, but I think you could spice up the harmonies a bit to make the important cadences sound more noticeable. Don't have to go crazy on it, I just feel it's lacking thos last 15% so that you can get to 100. -
By Jean Szulc · Posted
I agree a lot with @Luis Hernández. Your melodic material is much stronger than the one from your previous pieces. Everything feels quite repetitive. Also, I'd say that the contrapunctal passages are not very strong, and last not enough for them to cause any impact. Perhaps on your next pieces you could use a simpler form, that instead of relying on repetition relies on longer, more developmental sections. It would already make a ton of diference, as I sometimes sense you come up with something simple and just loops it over and over to the listener. -
Thanks again @Luis HernándezI appreciate the time you take to listen and give feedback for the pieces I put on here. Yes for some reason it sounded fine with all those changes from duplets to triplets. I'll probably name it rhapsody then. -
By Luis Hernández · Posted
Congrats to you all for your work. Many different approaches... For me, also a challenge to study your works. I've learnt a lot!
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