TomHan688

Thanks for the kind comments.. pequadcob: thanks- this is actually an audio export from sibelius using the steinway piano from Garritan Personal Orchestra - I probably couldn't play this live without making mistakes.. still, It's good to know the sampled version sounds quite lifelike (I spent quite a while tinkering with playback dynamics!) Serge: Thanks also, I was wondering about the title! I only named the piece once I'd finished writing, which is probably bad practice. All I knew while writing was that it should have a slightly strange quality to it that I couldn't describe.. 'Time-lapse' was the only thing I could think of that seemed to reflect the feel of the piece, so thanks for the reassurance!

Thanks - yes: bars 1-2 - D major7 / F#m bars 3-4 - Fm6 repeats up to bar 17 bars 17-18 / 21-22 - Db major7-9/6 depending on right hand bars 19-20 / 23-24 - Fm bar 25 - Eb bar 26 - Db bars 27-29 - Bb minor bars 17-29 repeated in bars 30-45, longer ending bar 46 - Bb minor bar 47 - F minor bar 48 - Db bar 49 - F minor / #5 repeats, bar 53 - Eb bar 54 - Gb major7 bar 55 - Db major 7 repeat bar 58 - E major7 bar 59 - Ebm7 bar 58 - E major 7 bars 61-62 - Bb7 bars 63-64 - C hope that's what you were after!

Thanks very much!

Hi, Just a short piano piece I composed (read 'slapped together') recently. It's mainly me experimenting with some ideas and sounds, not overly complex. I say 'slapped together' as I'm not too confident about transitions between sections, there's probably room for improvement there. Also the first page of music is a bit messy, I'm not sure if I've notated some parts wrongly or not. Anyway, thanks in advance for any feedback - I recommend listening to the mp3 without the score first. Mp3: http://www.box.net/shared/8orne30csd Score: http://www.box.net/shared/3d0v7xuo8l Youtube video:

This is great! It really sounds like it belongs in a film. The only thing I would say at a glance is that perhaps you could vary the minor 3rd intervals in the strings that begin at around 1.43, maybe adding some intervals of 4ths and 6ths - a minor point though. What samples / instruments did you use?

Thanks very much everyone for your opinions and advice! I'll post more soon.

Hi, I'm new here.. Thought I'd upload some compositions as I've never really had much feedback before now. This is an idea I wrote for piano - the theme is easy to spot, but I'm wondering if I need to refine the form. Basically I just got down the ideas without thinking much about how best to use them.. I'm also aware that the harmony doesn't change much.. I just felt that for this particular idea, that would be best. Audio: Score: http://www.box.net/shared/hqzox9kklo Thanks in advance for any feedback.