Eastern Suite (Part I): Mvt. I [WIP]

I've been working on a piece based on musical language from the eastern Hemisphere, and just wanted some feedback on it, if possible.

I plan to make it 10+ minutes long, and would like to see if I could add or fix things before I start working on the 2nd movement.

Here's a link to the score video: 

And higher quality images of the score:

Hello @K. A. Frayre!

Welcome to the forum!

I haven't listened to your music yet, but I have seen that you put each page of the score as JPG here, and the resolution is very clear. Would you instead upload the pdf file of the score so that viewers can look into the details in your music more easily? Also, it saves up space for your post haha.

Thx for joining our forum!

Henry