Achan

Your intro is very nice, all the instruments fit into place just like that, as it goes on the more interesting it gets, more instruments, more harmony. and then a short silence. the picolo (tahts what it is right) seems quite in tac and awesome melody, the triangle that follows the picolo has gutie a nice touch to it too. I like this song, its very very cool. good job :)

Long time no talk guys. Anyways I've made some edits to this song i made sometime earlier. I'd like some of your input, and uhh, outputs too :) lol, anyways gotta go, later..................hm tahts odd, i can't seem to add any attahemnets, any help would be delightful

Well, well, I'm stumped. I have an idea but you guys gotta help me out. if i were to add a new instrument what would it be. I've decided to add a timpani maybe. and what else may help thanks :P

;):D:D Hey Nickthoven, I'm not sure what you meant completely, but pretty sure enough to continue the song. Anyways, I've tried to add more marching effects and some parts were succesful. Here it is. Please give your honest opinions ;)

Hey Nickthoven, I'm not sure what you meant, are you saying i should keep the marching effect throughout the whole song? Achan, Thanks ;)

Um, pardon my confusness. but I'm afraid you have forgotten to post it. Or maybe i just can't see it. Sorry:(

Whew, that was really hard, thanks Ryan. I think I'm starting to understand what you meant. Well here is a revised version of the song, and it isn't near complete. I'm just posting it becuase I really dont know what to do next. Thanks

Interesting...I'll try it. :)

wow...your right, it is difficult. I have no clue how u started the song either

:cool: Bump ):

I like the ending and the 16ths notes...i hope you add more:D

Bounce is a pretty nice piece, gosh its kinda hard to critique about it, hmm you've got a good ascending and descending melody kinda thing. But you kinda went to far with you seconds, but thats alright becuase you sometimes need em to add a special effect. Its pretty good, I like it. good work, my favourite parts are 2:00 and 3:00 there really good:D keep it up

Yay, just like my suggestion:D Ryan, now whos a disgrace?...

Hey guys, I've added a new instrument "strings" to mmy unknown2 unfinished piece. Dunno what to name it, This time can you please at the same time as giving me your opinions also think of a name for this piece. Thanks

Alright, if you want me to write more about this song, this is what i have to say. Everyone has a different style of music, I, myself like techno music, and music with strings piano, a speedy flute and maybe a clarinet. For you, it can possibly a slow flute. If you don't want to make it more speedy thats fine, it's only advice. People have a completely different level and perspective of music. I like the harmony in your flute duet, but maybe not as much as i did with the melody. Or maybe theres something wrong with me, and I keep mixing up a melody, and harmony. Anyways, i can't say i liked it, and i can't say it was excellent, but it was good. I'll come back when you've another revision of you piece:)