KaitouKudou

it was really cool at first but then I started wanting some sort of change to make it sound less predictable. Your harmonization is very well done and choice of instruments was nice too. Did you record the electric guitar yourself, if so, that's some crazy skills there dude! :) Keep making those tunes cause they're great!

That was nice and relaxing. I think it felt a bit repetitive at times. Does it have lyrics by any chance? I imagined the melody being sung when I heard this for some reason. One little penalizing...the cymbol roll at the very end of the song was too loud

The lyrics are in Chinese, and the background music is midi written with noteworthy. Probably still a few quarks to work out but I think its a decent sounding composition. Tell me what you guys think? Open to all comments but preferably no empty flames.;) xiangsi.mp3 - File Shared from Box.net - Free Online File Storage

Thank you Ralph. I uploaded the mp3 to 301-2.mp3 - File Shared from Box.net - Free Online File Storage The actual is slightly faster then this mp3 I think.

Hello, I'm sort of new to this forum since I didn't come here after making an account.I'd like to think I'm intermediate on composing. Here is a piece i wrote recently mimicing the classic era. I would love to hear what you all think.:D Unfortunately, I cannot submit the mp3 playback of the piece. :( Does anyone know how I can upload an mp3 or where i can upload and link the page to here? 301-2.pdf

Is it ok to put 2 different songs on one thread? I've seen people doing that so...

Rough Draft of a song (Tondeikou) with lyrics. Piano Solo(For now) Lyrics(Japanese):,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,Translation: (intro) Osanaki koroni yume mita,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, When I was young I dreamed of Tatta hitotsu no taisetsuna mono wo,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, That one thing that was important to me Ima demo muneni kakaeteru,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, Even now I embrace it in my chest Anotoki no kimochi wo wasure takunai,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, I don't want to lose that feeling Kibou no kagayakide me wo samasu,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, I awake with the light of hope Tokino michini jibun no mi wo makase,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, Letting the path of time take me away Kimi no kaomitemo se wo mukete,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, The promise I made you yakusoku wo mamorutame tada touri susunda,,,,,,,,,,,,, I must turn my back to you Tsubasa wo hiroge,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, Open the wings soratobu tori no youni,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, Like the birds in the open skies touyi ano hikari eto tabitachi tai,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, Let us journey to the distant light tonde yikou,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, Let us fly (Middle section, no words) Kurai yoru samayotte kita sabishisa sae,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, Even the loneliness of wandering through the darkness of night kimi no koto kangaereba susundekeru,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, become endurable when I think about you Kimitonaraba ashitaga wakaranakutemo,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, If it's with you, I don't care what kind of day tomorrow will bring Kamawa naikara,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, (included in above sentence) Tsubasa wo hiroge,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, Open the wings soratobu tori no youni,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, Like the birds in the open skies touyi ano hikari eto tabitachi tai,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, Let us journey to the distant light tonde yikou,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, Let us fly Tsubasa wo hiroge,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, Open the wings soratobu tori no youni,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, Like the birds in the open skies touyi ano hikari eto tabitachi tai,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, Let us journey to the distant light tonde yikou,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, Let us fly If people would like to write lyrics to my music, I wouldn't mind that. Infact, I would appreciate it if they could help me with adding lyrics to them. New Song(Rough Draft).mid

Originally uploaded new piece: Moved after reading the rules, sorry.

Is that a pizzacatto strings I hear in the background? Man, love this song. The blend is good, so much different sounds yet they all work nicely together. You're an awsome composer!

Hey, upload is back up. Here is the first piece I'll submit for now. Everyone gave me same site, looks like I've found one haha. Thanks for the help all. TWMA.mid

No Mp3?? Guess I'll have to upload it somewhere else and post a link. Anyone know a good place for free music uploading?

Hmm, I think its an interesting piece but it definately lacks development...or maybe contrast is a better word. You started with the intense theme, continued with an intense theme, finished with an intense theme. Although if it was for a continuous battle theme, it would work very well. As a song, I think it would be one of those good to listen to once or twice but gets bored after that. Your use of dynamics was interesting at the opening. Very teasing to the ears. There are a few things I should note though. If this were to be actually played, alot of the flutes will be either unheard or just simply too screeching. Eg: Trumpets and flutes together: The flutes will have to be screeching or they will just simply disappear. This effect is usually used for marching band style. Clairnets and Flutes unison, I've tried myself but can't say it worked too great, octaves are alot better MOST of the time. I liked your piece, wish I could hear an mp3 version of it.

Just registered on this site and decided to submit one of my songs. Now if I only knew why the site is not letting my upload, everything would be great! It says upload failed when I click on my Midi. Anyone know how to fix?