TracyC

Hi Adrian Quince, and thank you! I'd say the three things I like most are that I think I achieved a pretty out-there sound while maintaining musicality on some level, I like my use of repeated motifs, and I think I achieved a certain level of contrast (between pizzicato and arco, forte and piano, chords and single notes, high and low notes, etc.). I would like to improve on my use of rhythm, my ability to create an emotional arc that is both complex and successful/coherent, and my ability to create an introduction that both sets up the rest of the piece and is interesting in itself. Hi Maarten Bauer, and thank you for your feedback! I was trying to play around with lack of structure in this composition but wasn't sure if I had used it successfully, so your thoughts on that are helpful.

This is a piece for solo unaccompanied violin that I've been working on and I'd love to hear feedback and things I can improve on. I'm pretty new to composition and this is one of the first pieces I've completed so I definitely have a lot to learn and I'd appreciate any pointers. Thanks!! P.S. Sorry about the poor handwriting!