Benedictus

I think that teacher needs a good kick up the arse. How dare she insult someone's work!?!?!? I thought it was overall a nice piece, although there seemed to be no main melody to cling to it had some nice ideas in there. Keep it up, I say. :)

Cheers for the comments guys. Now that you mention it, ajamesu, it does seem rather sudden the semi quavers that appear in the 18th bar. Btw, the piece is not meant to represent sorrow, entirely. How you understand it is different to how I intended it, which is as much a reflection of me as it is of you :) (maybe more on me) If you have any ideas on what I could to to improve I'd be more than happy to hear it. swankswede13, I'm happy you liked it : )

Hey there. I wrote a duet for guitar late last year but never got around to putting in to any notation software (I used paper.... =/ ) I think this is the right place for it.. So if you have any comments and/or criticism, it would be most welcome. Although I have kind of put this to rest, I'll take your ideas into consideration for future pieces. Let me know what you think : D http://www.youngcomposers.com/forum/attachment.php?attachmentid=5679&stc=1&d=1175737972 OhWanderingVagabond.MUS