camch23

I see what you mean about 61-62. I can make that transition much smoother, but at 46 I was trying to go for a drastic change in mood from previous measures. Do you notice anything else?

Thanks, can you share an example of what you mean?

The arc of the symphony begins painfully, then becomes optimistic and playful. As the end comes near, however, the mood is becomes unsure and melancholy again. It is mainly in the key of F# minor. This is just the first of four movements: Largo doloroso, Allegro vivo, Allegro animato, and the Finale.

Any feedback is appreciated, this is the first time I'm sharing a composition with others. https://drive.google.com/file/d/1ac0N4155-naKSfQ-lI3in4plNS71jDfZ/view?usp=sharing https://drive.google.com/file/d/1evdOrRNof3Wx4iYYQHaL6D5xt59oAOSg/view?usp=sharing