Miodzio102

Thank You for the clarification. I probably should do some very in depth analysis of my favorite long form compositions before i write something like this again.

Forgive my ignorance, but I'm not familiar with the concepts of descriptiveness and narrativity, in music. Is a descriptive musical element focused on embellishing and decorating the previously introduced material, while a narrative one on taking it in a new direction? I'd love to find out. I think I indeed put more thought into the atmosphere rather than the structure of the composition, perhaps that's just more important to my ears. I wrote a little bit about my rationale for some of the choices I made in this piece in the description of the video, though it's certainly not written from the standpoint of serious, academic music theory. Thank You very much for the criticism, and I also hope that I'll write even better stuff in the future.

Thanks for the recommendation.

I'm very grateful for the criticism. I really apologize for the lack of dynamics, my plugin made changing them tedious, so perhaps I should get some better software. You are also right in saying that I need to figure out a way to stop all of the voices from blending into an auditory soup. I'm also quite flattered by You calling my theme beautiful, and the composition theoretically acceptable. As for the sheet music, I wrote this piece in piano roll, so in theory I could transcribe it to sheet music, but I imagine it would take me yet another month to do that. Maybe next time I will use staff notation instead, although I find it less convenient. Anyway, thanks a lot for the comment, I'm quite glad that You enjoyed this piece.

Hi everyone, I've just joined this forum and I wanted to share my first large scale orchestral work. I uploaded it yesterday after working on it for a little over two months (During the first one I actually composed the music, and it took me yet another month to create the illustration and release the video). It consists of four movements and countless hours of work. I'll gladly hear your opinions on this piece, and I hope that You will enjoy it.