Mathieu

Thank you for your feedback it helps a lot !

Thank you for your feedback. I didn't mention that this piece was supposed to fit the mood of a particular artwork (https://www.artstation.com/artwork/XgBeQL) so it kinda is a soundtrack but i still tried to make it more than that if it makes sense. About the engraving its clear that i lack a lot of knowledge. The stems facing upward are not from the vibraphone but from the woodblocks, and they were placed like this by default on musescore and i didn't really pay attention to it but now i know how to fix them so thanks for pointing that out. And i had to put the "change instrument" at the start because i started the score with two sets of percussion and not vibraphone and bols chantants (singing bowls?) but i guess i had to plan that before creating the score. As for the flute i need to read more about it because i don't really understand what you are saying and for the tremolos i don't know why i tied them, i think i added the tremolos afterward so i forgot to remove the ties. Anyway, i have to learn more now. Thank you for taking the time to help me.

Small piece i composed for a competition in wich i didn't get selected. I'm self taught so i'm looking for as much feedback as i can so i can improve. here is the score : https://drive.google.com/file/d/1hvymRFoiykn59-FECQW4TVWuHsVBdDx2/view?usp=share_link and the audio : https://drive.google.com/file/d/1iW5m5wE1OH5l_gEcGfnQKHvgdY0mjXRV/view?usp=share_link Thanks for listening.

Thank you so much for your huge input, it'll help a lot for my understanding of what im doing and for future pieces since im self taught.

Hey thanks for listening ! I really liked composing it and yea im quite into composing from an abstract point of view and concepts on notes. And I wrote it using musescore 4, great software.

Yeah I see what you mean but it was kinda the point to use dissonances to express sharp emotions in a short time frame. Thank you for listening to it !

Miniature I.pdf Miniature I.mp3