Dave

I think it just sounds scary rather than being lost/asking for help/jealousy. It was ok, especially good from the part at 01:57 til end

I loved this. :thumbsup: Very nice and jazzy and surely strange. It kind of reminds me of Grim Fandago too

First off, I don't really think really sounds like a battle theme. I also think it's kind of boring that the whole song is simply repeated and there isn't really an ending either. Also, as Keerakh Kal said, it could probably use a melody. Edit: I just realized the ending thing might be intentional, in case this is a loop. Is it?

I liked it, but the ending sounded so sudden. Is it finished?

Hey. Thanks for replying and for listening. I am glad I got some positive feedback. About the song going random directions: yeah, it was pretty much intentional. I was trying to change the mood and I was experimenting a little. I am in fact not entirely new to composing; these songs are (at most) a couple of months old, and since that time I have been trying improve. I am trying really hard to force myself to finish a piece I started working on yesterday, but it seems as though often inspiration is lost after leaving it there for a while. :P

Hello, I'm new here. First off, these might sound unfinished. Here is a list of excuses why :D : 1. I don't have a midi keyboard and I only have 256 MB RAM. Working with music is HORRIBLE. This is actually a good excuse. 2. I'm really lazy. Really lazy. 3. I guess, admittedly, I'm not particularly creative. Ok, enough of the excuses... Here is a couple of songs I've made: [EDIT: Threw in another one.] http://213.113.162.35/amuse.mid This is probably a more recent song. It was supposed to give the feel of a deserted amusement park/evil clowns... Silly, yes? This one is in midi format. http://213.113.162.35/jst_wk.mp3 Pretty boring throughout, kind of intended. http://213.113.162.35/piano.mp3 I made this song after playing some FF9 for some reason. Not really a full song, though. http://213.113.162.35/hmm.mp3 I don't really know what I intended with this one. http://213.113.162.35/atk.ogg I couldn't get really this right, but it's supposed to sound battleish anyhow. The cello might be a bit low. http://213.113.162.35/short.mp3 Threw this in just for fun. Really short one. Listen to one or two (or more), comment. Be as rude as you have to. I don't mind. :)