I just joined the site.I know about counterpoint of bach. the use of point pedal allows to make "things" that are not tipical. your overuse of the harmonic tetracord is out of style, the use of parallel 5ths in a modal way is out of style too. the form in general is confused
, it is not clear, why dont you analize deeply the bach's works? try to compose an invention and a prelude and fugue following bach's formulas without using point pedal and using the correct modulations, you will surprise how much you will improve. and get a good teacher.