jakem

I really liked the lyrics a lot. The whole song was cool...sort of a nice melancholy tune, but the song still means something important. Nice work.

I thought it was really good! The guitar adds a very "bard-ish" feel to it that most Shakespeare-based pieces don't have. A couple of problems though. Some of the technical stuff is not correct. Like Mr. Tokke was saying, "thou" is only one syllable, so if you're going to do a run with it, it gets an extended underscore, not dashes. Also, the "Baritone" solo is way too low to be really called a baritone solo. Baritones typically don't go below a low B on average. Yours goes down to an F, which is more of a base part. You probably wrote the solo for yourself (I'm guessing) and you consider yourself a baritone part? It's totally fine, but consider calling it a "Base/Baritone Solo" Um......the actual choral part is pretty short. If I could put my two cents in, the natural place to bring in the SATB (for me) would be at measure 20 right before the "heigh-ho". I really do like it though. Keep up the good work!