alter

Sorry about quality, the piano is meant to be the vocalist and the drum part hasn't been written. Appreciate any comments, if it's crap tell me ... anything goes. Thanks. alt.mid

it's very nice. The vocalist was very good and kept me drawn to the song. I thought the use of operatic vocals could be better emphasized if you used a stronger, perhaps thicker texture of accompaniment instead of just the piano but maybe that's what you wanted. Towards the end before the vocalist came back it sounded more like a soundtrack, I was waiting for a pounding climax but it didn't come. But these are just minor opinions. Overall I enjoyed the piece, I thought it was refreshing to listen to.

It had a very nice groovy feel to it but I thought it was tad too repetitive.

hey guys, I just finished writing a song intended for a special friend. I haven't done the lyrics yet. I'd greatly appreciate any feedback or comments to make it better. Thanks. :) newsong.mid