Thank you both for the welcome, and taking the time to listen to the little (but long/repetitive) piece. :)
Marius: Thanks for the criticism, and suggestions. Sadly that music is already "out-the-door". I will keep those in mind as I work on other things. I was hesitant joining this board because I wasn't sure if this was just going to be a place where someone shares something and everybody is "hurray"-like. Indeed, my ideal hope was that it would be an incubator/ place of learning and I am happy to see that it is. I am excited to upload some more music to get some more great criticism and become better at what I wish to do, and do the same to others the help them accomplish their goals.