I also really like the piece. You do quite a lot with a pretty cool melody. Its amazing. I think that sometimes the rhythm comes across as too repetitive, but when you consider the harmonies and the melodic development, it seems inconsequential. Great Job!
Its a piece I wrote this summer to understand the sonata form and harmony. I think that it does well with balancing the form with expression, but I'm not sure. I hope you like it
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